Discussing effect -2 -revised

Acton is a small town which is a quiet, safe and clean place to live in the Midwest. Last month, however, Stanley Manufacturing decided to open a large factory in this town. I think it will lead to lots of negative effects. First of all, it will produce much pollution which will make the residents’ health get from bad to worse. Besides, it will raise the crime rate if many people are going to move to the community, and therefore the town will no longer be secure.  Then the town will no longer be secure. Although it will bring lots of jobs, I think the dwellers can establish some tourist spots to make the economic growth. Judging from these negative effects, I am opposed to opening a factory in Acton.