It's easy to receive an e-mail if you follow these directions. Before following the ways below, all you need is to apply for an e-mail ID. Then the first thing you have to do is to open the website and click the sign of mail. Before you type in your ID and password, make sure that there is no strange person around you. After you sign in, click the inbox and choose the letter you want to read. Just follow the steps above, then you can get your e-mail with ease.
最後的get要不要換成別的動詞看看呀?
回覆刪除感覺"get"好像比較像是實際上的得到
換成"view"等'查看'的意思看會不會比較好:D
簡潔有力~可是有點太短的感覺~
回覆刪除要不要再多加一點動作?
Then the first thing you have to do is to open the website and click the sign of mail.
回覆刪除mail 前面是不是需要加個a 或the
其他都沒什麼問題
snap 放在這裡適當嗎!?
回覆刪除apply要加for
同上...
回覆刪除你用snap的意思是?
好像怪怪的...
是apply for
回覆刪除其他都還可以
接一封信都要看有沒有陌生人也太累了吧
第一句和第二句有follow重複了~要不要把其中一個改同義字?(像obey之類的~)
回覆刪除其他沒問題囉:D
有點短可是問題不多:D
回覆刪除strange person也可以直接寫stranger!