2011年4月20日 星期三

A song that means a lot to me.

In our daily life, we must listen to many songs. Among these songs, the lyrics in them may be interesting, funny, touching and so on. To me, the song called “Happy Birthday” does really mean a lot to me even though it’s a common song and there are just four words in it. Every time I hear this song, I always feel pleased because it symbols my friends’ and my relatives’ love and consideration for me. Also, it makes me realize that I have grown up one year old and I will face new challenges and changes. Moreover, I know I should be more mature and responsible for myself. I think the song may be not only important to me, but also to everyone in the world.

7 則留言:

  1. 大致上沒有什麼問題摟!

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  2. I think the song may be not only important to me, but also to everyone in the world.

    not only~ but also要連接前後詞性相同的字詞喲!!
    如果改成→I ~may be important not only to me, but also to everyone in the world.參考看看八!

    另外阿~
    這次寫的不錯喲!!!!

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  3. 文章很流暢呢!
    寫得很好~

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  4. 沒什麼問題哦~~~
    寫得很好:D

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  5. 挖~寫的亂感人的~
    象徵的意義寫的很好喔!

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