There are two ladies hoodies which are alike in several ways. First, the colors of the Lourie’s hoodies are red, navy, white and green. Likewise, the colors of the Green’s are red, navy, white and green. Besides, the Lourie’s is as machine washable as the Green’s and the sizes about them are both for people who are at the age of four to fourteen. In addition, the Green’s is made by cotton blend and so is the Lourie’s. Finally, both of the two hoodies are even sold at the same price. I think I can tell the two hoodies only by the style.
the colors of the Lourie’s hoodies are red, navy, white and green. Likewise, the colors of the Green’s are red, navy, white and green.兩個句子重複囉!可以改一下字辭看起來比較不會像是一樣的鋸子
回覆刪除the Lourie’s is as machine washable as the Green’s這樣就變成the Lourie’s和the Green’s都使用機器洗,應該是衣服被洗而不是店被洗吧...
four to fourteen是size不是age哦XD
回覆刪除There are two ladies hoodies which are alike in several ways. (是兩間店的衣服在比較吧，這樣好像怪怪的)
回覆刪除who are at the age of four to fourteen
回覆刪除尺寸跟年齡不一樣喔!
who are at the age of four to fourteen~age改成size
回覆刪除both of the two hoodies are even sold at the same price
回覆刪除→both of the two hoodies even sell at the same price.
東西要用主動的樣子!
我查到的例句：These baskets sell well.
This oil painting sells for 500 dollars
the colors of the Lourie’s hoodies are red, navy, white and green. Likewise, the colors of the Green’s are red, navy, white and green.
回覆刪除合在一起寫看起來才不會這麼累贅喔!