There are some reasons for why I would hire Lynn Whitnall for the job. First of all, although Debra has more education then Lynn , Lynn still had been an English Instructor. Because of this, I think Lynn must be good at English and have enough sense about the job. Besides, Lynn had been a volunteer but Debra hadn't. I think a person who had been a volunteer is more willing to help others. I consider it is what a instructor need to do. Most important of all, Lynn is fluent in Spanish, French and Japanese. However, Debra is only fluent in French. An instructor who can speak more than one language can introduce to more people. For the reasons above, I'd like to hire Lynn Whitnall instead of Debra.
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回覆刪除開頭也太直接了吧!!
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what a instructor need to do(an)
*一開始可以描寫一下情竟,例如I'm hiring a new English instructor for my school, and I received two resumes from two people applying for the job. 之類的~。
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then→than其他就沒什麼錯了
回覆刪除開頭加上講義上面那行字感覺就不會太突然了~
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回覆刪除Debra has more education then Lynn怪怪的
妳是要寫書念的比較多還是教學經驗比較多?