When I was in Ilan last week, I ate at two restaurants which were really different. I had lunch at RORO Italiana and dinner at OROR Café. First of all, both of the pastas at RORO and OROR were so delicious that I even ordered two pieces. Also, the atmosphere at OROR Café was really comfortable, and so was RORO. Furthermore, the environment in OROR was as tidy, clean and quiet as RORO. The server at OROR was attentive. Likewise, the server at RORO was attentive .I can’t wait to introduce my friends the tasty food at the two restaurants.
文章蠻通順的~內容害我也好想去那兩間餐廳享受一下XD
回覆刪除The server at OROR was attentive(服務生應該不會只有一個吧!?)
回覆刪除server加s，be動詞改複數會比較好吧?!
回覆刪除RORO和OROR唸起來好饒舌喔~
薏靜ㄚ~
回覆刪除為甚麼開頭是寫 ~which were really different.但是後面的描述是描述他們很像的部份呢?是不是打錯了ㄚ?
第一行的different跟後面描述的有衝突
回覆刪除which were really different怪怪的~
回覆刪除可以寫附加論點看起來會比較豐富喔!