Expressing an Opinon(2) -revised

Have you ever meet people through online dating sites? Do you support it?

In my opinion, I think it's good to make friends through the Internet for several reasons below. First, you can tell all of your secrets to them and you don't need to worry that any of your friends will know about that. It can help you release some pressure. Besides when you are chatting with them, your typing speed will increase a lot. It will make it easier to pass the typing certification for you. Furthermore, you can know variety of people such as Japanese, American, and so on. Although some people may think it's dangerous to be friends with others through the Internet, I consider that you just need to be carefully as what you do with a stranger on the street. Due to all of these reasons, I am really in favor of meeting people through online dating sites.

Expressing an Opinon(1) - revised

In recent years, many people talk about the death penalty, do you agree with it?

In my opinion, I think the death penalty is in need of existing because of several reasons below. First, if there is no death penalty, people may think that they can kill anyone. It will surely cause the world in a state of chaos. Second, it's really unfair for those who are killed. Although, the Human Rights organization insists that no one can convict the criminals to death because they have their human rights, I think they must not consider that when the criminals kill others, have they thought of others' human rights? I believe that the answer is no for the reason that if they have, then they should not kill other people. Third, if the murderer is in prison instead of being sentenced to death, he/she will waste lots of national resources. With the number of murderers increasing, they will cause a big financial problem for a country. Taking into account all of these points, it should be clear that the death penalty is necessary.

Comparing(2)Revised

John Adams and Thomas Jefferson were both important for the American, and they were similar in many ways.  First of all, John Adams was once the president of United States and so was Thomas Jefferson and they were the signers of Declaration of Independence. Besides, both of them delegated to the Continental Congress and they studied laws. In addition, John Adams was a crucial person in the American Revolution. Similarly, Thomas Jefferson played a important role in the American Revolution. Finally, both of them died on July 4, 1826. Due to all of these reasons, I think it’s clear to know why they are still respected by all American.

Comparing(1)Revised

There are two ladies hoodies which are alike in several ways. First, the colors of the Lourie’s hoodies are red, navy, white and green and so are the Green’s. Besides, the Lourie’s hoodies are as machine washable as the Green’s and both of them are suitable for people whose size is from four to fourteen. In addition, the Green’s hoodies are made by cotton blend and so are the Lourie’s. Finally, both of the two hoodies even sell at the same price. I think I can tell the two hoodies only by the style.

Expressing an Opinon(2)

Have you ever meted people through online dating sites? Do you support it?

In my opinion, I think it’s good to make friends through the Internet for several reasons below. First, you can tell all of your secrets to them and you don’t need to worry that any of your friends will know about that. It can help you release some pressure. Besides, you can learn some talking skills when you are talking with them. Also, when you are chatting with them, your typing speed will increase a lot. Furthermore, you can know variety of people such as Japanese, American, and so on. Although some people may think it’s dangerous to be friends with others through the Internet, I consider that you just need to be carefully as what you do with a stranger on the street. Due to all of these reasons, I am really in favor of meeting people through online dating sites.

Expressing an Opinon(1)

In recent years, many people talk about the death penalty, do you agree with it?

In my opinion, I think the death penalty is in need of existing because of several reasons below. First, if there is no death penalty, people may think that they can kill anyone who they hate or at random. It will surely cause the world in a state of chaos.Second, it's really unfair for those who are killed. Although, the Human Rights organization insist that no one can convict the criminals to death because they have their human rights, I think they must not consider that when the criminals kill others, have they thought of others' human rights? I believe that the answer is no for the reason that if they have, then they should not kill other people. Third, if the murderer lives in prison instead of being sentenced to death, he/she will waste lots of national resources. As the number of murderers increasing, they will cause a big financial problem for a country. Taking into account all of these points, it should be clear that the death penalty is necessary.

Contrasting-2

There are some reasons for why I would hire Lynn Whitnall for the job. First of all, although Debra has more education then Lynn, Lynn still had been an English Instructor. Because of this, I think Lynn must be good at English and have enough sense about the job. Besides, Lynn had been a volunteer but Debra hadn't. I think a person who had been a volunteer is more willing to help others. I consider it is what a instructor need to do. Most important of all, Lynn is fluent in Spanish, French and Japanese. However, Debra is only fluent in French. An instructor who can speak more than one language can introduce to more people. For the reasons above, I'd like to hire Lynn Whitnall instead of  Debra.   

Contrasting-1

Fairfax Apartments and Campus Apartments differ in several ways. First of all, there are two large bedrooms in Fairfax, but there is only one bedroom in Campus. I think live in a large bedroom is more comfortable than in a moderate bedroom. Besides, Fairfax is furnished but Campus is not. This makes it much more inconvenient to live in Campus because you will need to spend time shopping for new furniture. Although pets are not allowed in Fairfax which is different from Campus, I think it is not a problem for me because I don’t like to keep any pets. Finally, the rent for Fairfax is $1250/month which is more expensive than the rent for Campus. But I can share the other room with my friend if I choose Fairfax. If I do this, I can just pay $625 for a month. I think I will choose Fairfax and now I have to ask my friend to live with me.

Comparing-3

When I was in Ilan last week, I ate at two restaurants which were really different. I had lunch at RORO Italiana and dinner at OROR Café. First of all, both of the pastas at RORO and OROR were so delicious that I even ordered two pieces. Also, the atmosphere at OROR Café was really comfortable, and so was RORO. Furthermore, the environment in OROR was as tidy, clean and quiet as RORO. The server at OROR was attentive. Likewise, the server at RORO was attentive .I can’t wait to introduce my friends the tasty food at the two restaurants.

A song that means a lot to me. (revised)

In our daily life, we must listen to many songs. Among these songs, the lyrics in them may be interesting, funny, touching and so on. To me, the song called “Happy Birthday” does really mean a lot to me even though it’s a common song and there are just four words in it. Every time I hear this song, I always feel pleased because it symbols my friends’ and my relatives’ love and consideration for me. Also, it makes me realize that I have grown up one year old and I will face new challenges and changes. Moreover, I know I should be more mature and responsible for myself. I think the song may be important not only to me, but also to everyone in the world.