2011年3月2日 星期三
A Dream I Have Had
I have had a dream which was filled with ridiculousness and fun. In the dream, I was studying in my classroom. Suddenly, I saw a helicopter hanging a large building flying very speedy toward my school. Being unable to stand the strong attack from the helicopter, my school collapsed and fell into Taiwan Strait ! However, it wasn't the end of my dream. My school turned into a machine kingdom instantly and every one was still alive. I became Rock Woman and had to struggle with the monster. We fought on a strange place where was moving down fast. The monster was running after me and then it waved its weapon to me. Luckily, I dodged and started to fire x-ray to it. Unfortunately, I ran out of my energy of x-ray and I ran into a big hole in front of me. After I ran into the hole, I realized that the hole was the end of a carousel! I saw a sign which read"Game over" then I woke up. It was such a funny and excited dream that I have ever had.
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哈囉薏靜
回覆刪除不知道是不是字體的問題逗號和句號看起來都一樣耶~~~
第九行every one 要合起來吧!!
回覆刪除倒數第三行the end of a carousel 旋轉木馬的盡頭!???
有點奇怪!!
Rock Woman前面需要有定冠詞吧!!
倒數第五行的and 是不是要用then會比較通順
1.荒謬又有趣~怪怪的感覺~
回覆刪除2.my school collapsed and fell into Taiwan Strait!要用被動吧!
3.the end of a carousel看不懂
4.then I woke up前面加個逗號吧!
collapsed是像房屋倒塌那種耶
回覆刪除最後的結論句...好像不太合
其他沒問題:))
哈~
回覆刪除你的內容好酷喲~^_^
上面的人都回完了
回覆刪除應該是沒有問題了吧
carousel我還是找不到輸送帶的意思欸
沒有什麼問題..
回覆刪除腦包
回覆刪除坐在你旁邊有建議都直接給了所以沒什麼可回~~~~
回覆刪除果然是夢因為你不會看書:D
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