2011年3月2日 星期三

A Dream I Have Had

  I have had a dream which was filled with ridiculousness and fun. In the dream, I was studying in my classroom. Suddenly, I saw a helicopter hanging a large building flying very speedy toward my school. Being unable to stand the strong attack from the helicopter, my school collapsed and fell into Taiwan Strait! However, it wasn't the end of my dream. My school turned into a machine kingdom instantly and every one was still alive. I became Rock Woman and had to struggle with the monster. We fought on a strange place where was moving down fast. The monster was running after me and then it waved its weapon to me. Luckily, I dodged and started to fire x-ray to it. Unfortunately, I ran out of my energy of x-ray and I ran into a big hole in front of me. After I ran into the hole, I realized that the hole was the end of a carousel! I saw a sign which read"Game over" then I woke up. It was such a funny and excited dream that I have ever had.

10 則留言:

  1. 哈囉薏靜
    不知道是不是字體的問題逗號和句號看起來都一樣耶~~~

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  2. 第九行every one 要合起來吧!!
    倒數第三行the end of a carousel 旋轉木馬的盡頭!???
    有點奇怪!!
    Rock Woman前面需要有定冠詞吧!!
    倒數第五行的and 是不是要用then會比較通順

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  3. 1.荒謬又有趣~怪怪的感覺~
    2.my school collapsed and fell into Taiwan Strait!要用被動吧!
    3.the end of a carousel看不懂
    4.then I woke up前面加個逗號吧!

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  4. collapsed是像房屋倒塌那種耶
    最後的結論句...好像不太合
    其他沒問題:))

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  5. 上面的人都回完了
    應該是沒有問題了吧
    carousel我還是找不到輸送帶的意思欸

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  6. 坐在你旁邊有建議都直接給了所以沒什麼可回~~~~

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  7. 果然是夢因為你不會看書:D

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