The most terrible night in my life. Revised1

Every time I see my scar on my leg, I cannot but tremble. The scar was made in a windy night. That night, my mom cooked in the kitchen as usual and then my family had dinner with pleasure. We talked a lot about our future and shared our dreams. ”Ding-dong!” ”Ding-dong!” Our bell rang and my father went to open the door. About five minutes later, my mom and I felt confused because we didn’t hear any voice after my father went to open the door. Then we went to the door to see who had come. What we saw there was three thieves and my father having already passed out. Mom was so afraid that she screamed stridently. This way caused one of the thieves to notice us, and soon we were captured by him with a gun. The thief asked my mom to give him one million dollars at once or he would kill we family, and then he had my mom take out the money. As soon as my mom went to take the money, she secretly called the police. However, what she did was found by a fat thief and he was so nervous and angry that he took out his gun and shot to my mom. Immediately I ran to my mom and blocked the bullet. Luckily, the police came at once and arrested the three thieves. However,the gunshot wound left a scar on my leg; sometimes, it still causes me to feel irritated . I think I would never forget that terrible night in my life.