I am studying at Department of Applied Foreign Languages in National Tainan Commercial Vocational Senior High School . I am glad to have so many lovely classmates to learn and experience a lot of activities together. They are so humorous and kind to me. Because of them, I feel it is interesting to go to school.
Since I was a child, I have had a big crush on English. I found English very interesting and I have been curious about this language – how amazing it is that everything could be expressed by the 26 letters in the alphabet! This is why I chose it as my major. I have always believed in the saying “No pain, no gain.” Since it is very important for a person who wants to succeed to make efforts, I ask myself to learn everything to the best of my ability. Thus, I always pay attention to what my teachers teach in class, take notes of key points and study hard after class. As a result, my academic performance has been not bad.
During the three years, I served as the Hygienic section chief for last four semesters. Within the four semesters, I’ve learn how to distribute jobs properly and fairly and many tips and knowledge about cleaning. For example, I used to use the newspaper to clean the windows before I knew that using newspaper to clean window would scratch glasses. I think it is really a good job for me because I’ve learned a lot from it.
In my extracurricular activities, I enjoyed playing volleyball with my friends. We always play volleyball games with other students in my school . In these games, I made many friends, expanded my social circles, and learned what is called teamwork. I also like to listen to English songs in my leisure time, and try to understand and memorize the lyrics. By doing this, I have improved my English listening ability a lot.
第四段的I’ve learn-->I've learned
回覆刪除文章中出現蠻多many和a lot,可以嘗試換句話說~
I ask myself to learn everything to the best of my ability.有點怪怪的感覺~
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how to distribute jobs properly and fairly and many tips and knowledge about cleaning.
會不會太多and阿!
要不要加點社團生活~
還有~擦窗戶那一段真的看不懂ㄋㄟ~
I made many friends要不要改成
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這樣???
In my extracurricular activities我絕得改成as to my~比較好因為我會一直困惑是不是用in :)
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