My name is Yi-Ching Huang. There are four members in my family. My father is a responsible and honest merchant. I learn from him that it is no use blaming others when something bad happens, and that what counts is to correct the errors in a proper way. My mother is a career woman. I think she is a wonderful woman. When my brother and I were little children, she not only took good care of us but also did well in her work. What she did makes me believe that there is nothing you can’t do with effort. My elder brother is a student, who majors in Geomatics at National Cheng Kung University . He teaches me lots of things. I think he is not only my brother but also my good teacher and friend. I am lucky to have this lovely family.
there is nothing you can't do with effort
回覆刪除->there is nothing you can do without effort
我覺得這樣比較順一點啦:D
其他應該是沒問題囉
What she did makes me believe that there is nothing you can’t do with effort.
回覆刪除要用同一個人稱吧!there is nothing I can't do without effort
要不要加一些轉折詞之類的(therefore, however之類的)
簡單明瞭~讚~!!!
第二句根本在說謊-..-
回覆刪除其他沒什麼啦GOOD
wei+1
回覆刪除要不要說為什麼妳絕得妳媽媽很perfect